Jerry: Very well done. I am particularly impressed with the intermingling of image and sound. You really have built on the foundation created by “Object of Refraction”. I liked having dialogue. I thought Dana did a nice job and is very talented. I think you have a tangible and believable presence on the screen- very real. All in all, extremely compelling. Keep it up- can’t wait for more.
the written reel 
Jerry: Very well done. I am particularly impressed with the intermingling of image and sound. You really have built on the foundation created by “Object of Refraction”. I liked having dialogue. I thought Dana did a nice job and is very talented. I think you have a tangible and believable presence on the screen- very real. All in all, extremely compelling. Keep it up- can’t wait for more.